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Re: Response to a Writing Prompt: "You are the last person on Earth"
« Reply #1 on: January 26, 2014, 05:18:47 AM »
Pretty nice. Quick read, nothing extraneous.

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Re: Response to a Writing Prompt: "You are the last person on Earth"
« Reply #2 on: January 26, 2014, 07:37:21 AM »
Glad you liked!

Out of the 30 or so people who have read this story, you are the first to catch that very awkward typo: thank you!

Edit: one thing I do need help on is a title. Gravedigger gives it away, and I'm at a loss of what else fits.
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Re: Response to a Writing Prompt: "You are the last person on Earth"
« Reply #3 on: January 26, 2014, 08:43:19 AM »
Cutely done.  I'd suggest making the title a riff on the beginning rather than the end, like "The Luckiest Man (Left) on Earth".
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Re: Response to a Writing Prompt: "You are the last person on Earth"
« Reply #4 on: January 26, 2014, 02:52:18 PM »
I like the title, stolen!
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Re: Response to a Writing Prompt: "You are the last person on Earth"
« Reply #5 on: January 26, 2014, 03:18:27 PM »
I enjoyed waking up to this little read. By itself, it's a nice morsel of food-for-thought, but if you ever decided to expand upon it, color me interested. Well done.